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Homework Assignment #5

Posted By on July 13, 2011

Homework Assignment #5

Spellcast by Barbara Ashford

Completely unknown book to me. Not much to say, except that I’m not going to go out of my way to prevent spoilers.

 

The Adult:

Spellcast is an adult novel, from the scattering of intimate scenes (no cut to black here) to the apt usage of obscenity. The first person narrator uses expletives rarely, usually to humor, and always fitting. It lends to her voice, which dominates descriptions of other characters and fades out somewhat for the graphic sex. One of the sex scenes plays to an interesting point, justifying its existence, and there is a later one as a confirmation of the relationship, but beyond that they aren’t doing anything other than emphasizing the adult rating.

 

The Ancient Inhuman:

Actually, out of the books I’ve read with an old, non human character, this is one of the better examples. Sure, Rowan has been significantly humanized by the time of the story, but his lapses show what he was just as much as the informed/flashbacked past. He only has a couple assigned ‘old’ characteristics, and they blend in with the rest of the description. All in all, he is shown as being not entirely human, not entirely the age presented. This is preferably to say, the vampires of Twilight which only had ‘old’ tags, a few tellings, and a lot of angst for a group that was still within normal human lifespans, or the vampires of Interview With the Vampire, where they angst a lot and either continually blend in with the new society, or get detached and slowly go mad/wither/die.

Granted, vampires have the excuse of having been humans before, and Rowan is merely becoming more human-like, but still, he reads believably well as a non-human character.

He is also an excellent example of the old, depressed, creative Ancient Thing, interacting with humans. I will have to keep it in mind for certain characters and stories that are in need of editing.

 

The Ending:

I feel like the ending was supposed to be bittersweet, as most separations of lovers tend to be, but the characters involved are so busy being mature and understanding about it that it comes off as merely an indefinite parting. My reaction was decidedly ‘meh, makes sense.’ If the intent was for bittersweet, then it missed, and I’m not sure exactly how it could be altered to hit the mark. Having the characters actually protest against someone else pointing out the necessity might have worked, but it would rob the couple of the agency they struggled to attain.

But he still should have gone on a road trip or something. Two hundred years stuck on the same parcel of land and he didn’t even look over the fence before skedaddling out of the story and the narrator’s life…

 

I didn’t get more than a chapter into the book before I decided it’s genre was romance (however with the supernatural/mythological/fantastical leaning). It isn’t. Technically the plotline follows the character development, which coincides with the relationship, but since the romance seems to carry the greater weight of the plot, it still read like a romance novel. This led to the later realization that I am unduly critical of romances. My expectations lower and my sarcasm condenses.

This isn’t fair, and I will have to remember this when reading other romance-heavy stories.

Homework Assignment #4

Posted By on June 14, 2011

Uglies by Scott Westerfeld

Prior to reading, I had heard the titles of individual books in the series, usually in relation to their release dates. Beyond that, I had only my own scattered assumptions based on those titles, which thankfully fell horribly short (I was expecting something about cliques in high schools).

 

The Archetype:

The world at work here is a dystopia. There’s some added embellishments, but by and large, the architecture is familiar even if the décor is personalized. There is a controlling government focused on an issue of today taken to the Nth degree and the plot largely focuses on bringing society back from this brink. The only major alterations I found from the dystopias of highschool (Fahrenheit 451, 1984, and Brave New World) is a matter of Uglies being part of a series rather than a stand-alone.

Thus, this book falls into the analysis framework of those textbook novels and could be taught/essayed just as easily. But this wasn’t assigned for a class; this book was assigned to learn how different authors write things differently.

 

Within the Archetype:

The gadgetry is both fun and internally consistent. There’s enough science for handwaving, but not so much that I feel like I’m reading the technical manuals or patiently waiting for the author to stop trying to convince me they built working models in their garage. Devices are remembered throughout the book (with the exception of the toothpaste pill. It’s mentioned once, never returns, and actually doesn’t make a whole lot of sense in a world that’s fond of its cosmetic surgery and dentistry) and fit in the world.

 

The Voice:

Unlike my other assignments, Uglies is solidly third person limited. Unfortunately, after the highly effective form/voice of the previous three books, I found myself disappointed here. It’s third, but it’s so limited a third that it might as well be first person. Tally never describes herself beyond her flaws, even though a third person perspective should be able to ‘see’ what she looks like. It’s thematic to harp on the flaws, but it leaves me with an impression of a girl with frizzy hair and an on-again-off-again squint, but nothing else. I know more about her oft-changed shoes than her hair color.

Tally gains nothing for the third person, but she doesn’t lose anything either. It’s the sort of inoffensive middle of the road that I should actually aim for, since I generally write in the third person.

 

I need to borrow the next books in the series, for although the book came to a reasonable conclusion, the crooked dystopic society has neither crumbled, nor crushed the rebellion. If the rest of the series can both hold internal consistency and add to the world and story, I will not be disappointed.